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I gave myself a challenge of a Haiku that rhymes, about the sunset, without the words sun or sunset.

Enjoy!

Fading into  night

Red glowing ball of  pure light

Now it’s out of sight

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  • boomiebol Reply

    Nice, very nice

    August 24, 2012 at 1:43 am
    • sholashade Reply

      Thank you! When great poets like your work, you know you are on to something!

      August 24, 2012 at 4:25 pm
  • gladiuspoeticus Reply

    Great one, Shola! You extended the concept of Haiku and made life a lot more difficult for many of us 🙂

    August 24, 2012 at 4:01 am
    • sholashade Reply

      Thank you for your kind compliments! But I am not half the poet that you are…..

      August 24, 2012 at 4:24 pm
  • Sandra Adegoke Reply

    Extending yourself to greater heights.Wonderful.

    August 24, 2012 at 11:42 am
  • thoughtsfromanamericanwoman Reply

    Lovely – I can visual the sun on a hot day in summer big and beautiful on a cloudless night as it sets, casting its bright shadows on our walls. Blessings – Patty

    August 24, 2012 at 3:46 pm
    • sholashade Reply

      Thank you Patty! I live in the city and I do not often get to watch the sun setting. Last month I visited Lake Geneva and got to slow down and watch a beautiful sunset, from whence came the inspiration for this Haiku

      August 24, 2012 at 4:23 pm

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